"I'm not a badass, but I can be." - Jimmy Ray
I'll forgive your use of the wrong name, because "Temptations" is harder to fit into your haiku. I commend you for not taking the easy way and using "Gold Club." Sure, the syllables fit, but the Gold Club sucks.
That was my thought process exactly.
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I'll forgive your use of the wrong name, because "Temptations" is harder to fit into your haiku. I commend you for not taking the easy way and using "Gold Club." Sure, the syllables fit, but the Gold Club sucks.
That was my thought process exactly.
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